BUBBLES
Posted by: Aarya on: November 13, 2008
BUBBLES
Oh! bubble, bubble
Where do you go,
Where do you go.
Why can’t you shine
Like the sun at day time
Why can’t you twinkle
Like the stars at night
Oh! bubble, bubble
Where do you go,
Where do you go.
You are made of water,
Not with solid
You are the angels of heaven
Without wings
Oh! bubble, bubble
Where do you go,
Where do you go.
Where are you going
Far from me
Away from me
Oh! bubble, bubble
Where do you go,
Where do you go.
16 Responses to "BUBBLES"
November 16, 2008 at 11:44 am
Oh! bubble, bubble
Where do you go,
Where do you go..
nice poem arya.keep writing
November 16, 2008 at 3:41 pm
Little Arya, Your Poem is so good.
A bubble which reflects all the 7 seven colours is such a beautiful thing. But it is a pity that many beautiful things are short-lived too!
Continue writing, Arya.
November 17, 2008 at 7:11 am
Dear Maalu,
Marvellous imagination !!!. u r that bubble… shining in day and twinkling like a star in night… great job… keep on writing.. all my best wishes Maalu…. keep it up…
December 9, 2008 at 9:30 pm
My Dear Arya,
I enjoyed your poem, and anxiously waiting for more poems and writing from you, keep the good work up.
Best wishes,
Girish Kumar,
New Jersey.
December 16, 2008 at 3:45 pm
Arya Mol,
It is surprised me. A wonderful world of different thought; with a little sharp ‘naughty’ questions.
(Use Question mark ‘?’ when you ‘ASK’ something.)
with love
Siva Uncle
December 17, 2008 at 6:00 am
Dear Malau,
It’s very good poem . Keep writing dont stop . May god bless you always.
Kind Regards,
Madhu & Family.
December 18, 2008 at 10:15 am
Arya…
Good work
continue writing. all the best.
November 16, 2008 at 11:18 am
“..Why can’t you shine
Like the sun at day time
Why can’t you twinkle
Like the stars at night….”
commendable effort.. for a beginner!
Keep it flowing, Arya dear!